Written Feedback Report

Mastering HKDSE English writing requires more than just practice; it demands personalised insights and expert guidance. Our written feedback reports, meticulously crafted by seasoned experts, cater to your specific needs and empower you to enhance your performance in the DSE English writing assessments.
Our written feedback reports provide:

  • Expert Guidance: Your marker will be a highly experienced English language expert, former examiner, or seasoned educator.
  • In-Depth Understanding: Our team possess comprehensive knowledge of the DSE marking criteria.
  • Detailed Insights: Receive a report that pinpoints key areas of concern or recurring patterns in your writing.
  • Actionable Advice: Gain clear and practical guidance on how to improve your writing effectively.
  • Swift Turnaround: Your detailed feedback will be delivered to you in only a few days.

Click the link below, upload your work, and receive a comprehensive feedback report that will help you unleash your potential and optimise your DSE writing performance!

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DSE Speaking workshops

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Length: 30/40/45/60 minutes
Frequency: 1/2/3/4 sessions per student per week
Students per group: 2/3/4
Delivery: Online via zoom/google meet/teams
Teacher: DSE specialist teacher /DSE experienced NET / English language expert
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The teacher will guide the students through a mock DSE speaking assessment (Part 1). Guidance will be given depending on the learning goals for the session. Students will be encouraged to discuss and analyse their performance. They will be given advice and actionable feedback that they can bring into future sessions.
During the sessions, our teachers will be closely observing the students’ performance to pinpoint any concerns, challenges, and opportunities for enhancement. Our team will devise personalized learning maps for each student, ensuring their growth and advancement are managed efficiently, and they receive adequate support to foster their development and progress.
The wide range of expertise in our teaching team means that we can analyse students’ performance in a range of areas, dependant on your school’s needs. Sessions can be led by a single teacher, allowing for personalized attention to each student, or by a team for a broader range of knowledge to benefit the students.

DSE writing feedback

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Marker: DSE specialist teacher /DSE experienced NET / English language expert
Key Marking and Feedback Areas: ‘CLO’ (Content Language Organisation) / Genre awareness / Grammar and Language use / tone, register and style

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Schools submit a soft copy of the writing piece to Blue Water.
Our markers prioritize the area of feedback and guidance based on the needs of the school and the student. This could be a focus on the DSE marking criteria: Content, Language and Organisation, but feedback and guidance on genre awareness, grammar and use of English, or on tone and register can be more important for different students at different stages. We offer marking and feedback in any areas that a school or student needs.
After conducting initial marking in the requested areas, our markers will refer to the student’s individual learning map and consider any previously observed systematic errors, trends, or issues present in the work and add any new observations. This means that the more our markers work with a particular student’s work, the more effective support they are able to provide.
In the final stage, a detailed marking report is sent to the school with detailed targeted feedback, guidance, and an action plan for the student to follow up on. This plan is logged in a progress map that can guide and reinforce the student’s development over time.